Its come back again because I think it disappeared for long enough..
Now im empty again its time to put it back up, and write more.
I don't know what you're thinking,
I won't relate to you,
You don't know what I'm thinking,
Though you say you do.
Theres only one true person,
Who knows just what i'll do,
I won't let them get away,
Don't worry i'll get you too.
You made me shed the tears,
I never thought I'd shed,
Maybe if you hadn't
I might not be dead.
So yes I slit my wrists,
and yes I cry at night,
Just to be honest,
I wanted to hold you tight.
Safe in your arms,
Hidden out of sight,
The horrible scars you gave me,
Would give you such a fright.
The true nightmares start now,
The way I said they would,
Then you started laughing,
Just the way you should.
Because now you're screaming,
With all the terror and the fear,
Seeing what you've put me through,
I find revenge quite dear.
So you've run away,
Don't tell me you're alone,
You don't know what it's like,
To be in the real dead zone.
Well I won't give up yet,
I'll entice you in my dreams,
and suffer the tears of regret,
Remember nothing is as it seems.
So I may be gone,
I will haunt you yet,
I'll chase you to the ends of the earth,
Until you have repaid your debt.
Siân- Darksmoke101















Comments
The only con. crit. that I have is that some of your punctuation seems a bit off- I could point out which ones, if it interested you.
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"I'm going to sit on your head until morning, because there's something about you that I don't understand!"
~Gotta love that predator logic!
Thankyou, I write things like this in my emo mood.. im a very vengeful little soul (be worried xD)
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late to school on mondays- plotting revenge is fun! (and my job)
Intimidating...
I want Lavi's innocence.. and not just his hammer XP
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late to school on mondays- plotting revenge is fun! (and my job)
Intimidating...
I want Lavi's innocence.. and not just his hammer XP
It's a beautiful poepm, however sad.
*cuggles*
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There's lots of things I could put here, but I'm not quite lame enough to convey emotions, or to quote lyrics. Jokes are just...no.
Hmm, difficult.
I'll just say hello. Hello!
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There's lots of things I could put here, but I'm not quite lame enough to convey emotions, or to quote lyrics. Jokes are just...no.
Hmm, difficult.
I'll just say hello. Hello!
I never knew you had dA!!
*cuddles you too*
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late to school on mondays- plotting revenge is fun! (and my job)
Intimidating...
I want Lavi's innocence.. and not just his hammer XP
xx
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There's lots of things I could put here, but I'm not quite lame enough to convey emotions, or to quote lyrics. Jokes are just...no.
Hmm, difficult.
I'll just say hello. Hello!
I know, and I still cant believe you have it!
Im like
HELL YEAH!!!! ANOTHER dA BUDDY!!!!
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late to school on mondays- plotting revenge is fun! (and my job)
Intimidating...
I want Lavi's innocence.. and not just his hammer XP
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